Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts

Sunday, September 8, 2019

Feedback Strategies

Thoughts on : 5 Reasons to Stop Saying Good Job (link here) and How to Provide Great Feedback When You’re Not In Charge (link here

(The Importance of Feedback: by Feedback Padlet)

These two articles were highly informative on how to give good feedback to both children and adults. For children I was unaware about the dangers of a "good job." I am still unsure how I feel about the article. I did like how the goal of feedback for kids should be to encourage their growth and push them to be more independent. It also explained different alternatives that spark a intellectual conversation with the feedback. Overdoing "good job" can definitely create a habit in kids and encourage that they should only get to a certain point and then they need approval. With that said, if it is not overused it is a great way to encourage kids to keep going. 
 
I have always struggled giving feedback to my superiors because I am cautious that I could offend them. The article How to Provide Great Feedback When You’re Not In Charge (link hereaddressed this with three feedback types/strategies: application, advice, and evaluation. The appreciation type reminded me of how beneficial feedback that has a positive tone is. By using gratitude, you are providing feedback. On part that really stick out to me was how to give advise. An example would be saying something like this: this worked pretty well for xyz, what do you think about trying abc next time to improve the results even more. It seems beneficial and more encouraging. Evaluation is not a great tool for feedback, but taking the fall first is. By putting yourself in the hot seat and create the atmosphere for coaching and improvement. 



Topic Research: Children's Stories of the Stars

The Big and Little Bear

(The Big Bear and the Little Bear: by Norm McCarter)


The King of the Stars fell in love with a beautiful woman on Earth and they had a child. One day the mother fell very ill, but refused to die. The illness was contagious and the other and child had to be separated. The child could not be without her mother and suffered greatly. The father saw this and wanted to bring his child happiness. The King of the Stars knew the only way to let his child see her mother was for them to leave their human form. He placed both of them in the sky as bears, the animal that was believed to be able to continue fighting after being wounded and could heal wounds. He placed them where his child could watch over her mother and be close to her. The King of the Stars watches them from Earth.

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Cygnus

There were once two friends who loved to race: a young man and a woman. One day they decided to race through the Milky Way. When then cut through the solar system they tried to get through the asteroid belt instead of going around to save time. An astroid hit the woman's chariot and she fell to Earth. She fell deep into the Eridanos river and was trapped under the crashing waves of Poseidon. The man immediately went to Earth to rescue her, but was no match to Poseidon. He asked Zeus to make him a fish to swim to her, Zeus made him a fish, but he caught by a fisherman and returned to the Gods. He then asked Zeus to make him a shark, Zeus made him a shark, but when his friend saw him she swam away in fear. He then asked Zeus to make his a swan because they could dive deep and  they are a creature of love. Zeus told him that he has asked for too much. He begged to be a swan. Zeus told him that once he was a swan he could no longer be anything else. He would live eternity as a swan on Earth and would lose his immortality. He agreed and Zeus made him a swan. He saved his friend. She was grateful and asked Zeus to join her friend as a swan too. When he died, Zeus placed him in the stars for his unselfish act.

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Lupus

A hunter was traveling across the arctic and spotted a pack of wolves. He killed most of the wolves except for a few who ran off and one small pup who stayed near her mother. He called this wolf Ainu. He taught Ainu to help him hunt and in return he fed Ainu well. After a while they became companions. One day however, the hunter was hunting a pack of wolves. Upon attack Ainu realized that this pack of wolves was her family and she turned on the hunter. She led the wolves to safety then went back to the hunter. The hunter was angry and shot Ainu.  For her courage and love, she was placed in the stars to live eternity watching over her pack. All wolves will howl to her when they are in need of her help. 

Sources to utilize

(Milky Way: by Creative Commons)











Thursday, September 5, 2019

Week 3 Story: Cupid and Castor: the modern tale of magic and power

Authors Note: This story is inspired by Cupid and Psyche along with legends of Greek Gods Castor and Pollux. Cupid is female in this story and Psyche is a male named Castor. The general story line is similar to Cupid and Psyche, but condensed and simplified (if you wish to read a synopsis click here, if you wish to read the story click here). Essentially Castor falls in love with Cupid, but breaks Cupid's trust. Cupid, who was protecting Castor and fell in love with him, now must leave Castor to defend for himself. Here is the legend of Castor and Pollux: Castor is a Greek God that has a half brother Pollux. Pollux's father is Zeus and Castor's father was king of Sparta. The brothers were in battle when Castor was wounded and Pollux was attacked. Zeus saved Pollux. After, Pollux asked to share his immortality with Castor (read in greater detail here).


It was February 13th and a young man sat alone on his couch thumbing through Netflix. It was snowing outside his apartment, which squashed any plans of him going out to the bars with his buddies. He was an attractive man, possibly the most attractive man in the world. Even so, his handsome nature did him few favors when it came to woman. No woman had found him as a suitable companion. So there he sat, and after a few moments he fell into a deep sleep.

When he woke, he found himself in a meadow covered by the glimmer of the sun's first light. It was a place he had never been, nor could have ever imagined its beauty. In front of him grew a single white rose. He though it had to be a dream, a rose could not grow that fast. He looked for a thorn on the rose and pricked his finger. If it was a dream he should feel nothing, but the pain was excruciating and he drifted back into a sleep.

(Sea of Flowers: by Creative Commons)

The next time he awoke he was welcomed by blackness. He raised himself from where he laid. Clouds of interstellar dust wrapped around him and drenched him in the finest of clothing and sweetest of scents, and just like that they were gone. Back into the night sky the lovely magic went. He stumbled in the dark to open a door. Outside the door was nothing short of spectacular. It was space, moving around him at the speed of light. Planets spun. Stars twinkled. Constellations came to life, moving and talking to one another as if they contained life. Interstellar dust of every color came and went and then without hesitation one pocket of dust slammed the door on his face.

"You mustn't be stupid Castor, this space is not kind to a mortal, even one who has the potential to return to his seat with the Gods. Keep this door closed and resist temptation to light the room. It is due to your stupidity you must be hidden here, do not allow stupidity to rear its head and end your life forever."

The interstellar dust dissipated but confusion emerged. Before Castor could wrap his mind around the message sent a presence appeared in the room. He could not see it, but his heart longed for whatever it may be.

"After you tricked the almighty Zeus into stealing you brother Pollux from the stars he sentenced you to a new life as a mortal. Within his anger appeared a mistake and you were born with the capabilities that no mortal should possess. As you aged Zeus came to understand the power of his mistake and sent me to be your lover. You are destined to be a captive and to live entirety in a darkness without the light your brother may have brought you."

Fear rushed into Castor, but with the touch of an unknown woman all thoughts were erased and love filled him once again.

When he woke the next day, his lover was gone. Many months of this occurred. Castor and the woman would talk for many hours every night about his longing for the stars, and the woman told him more about his brother trapped within them. One night Castor begged the woman to let him see the stars once more, and breaking the rules of Zeus she opened the door and disappeared before her lover could see her. He begged again the following night, and the night after that. Castor felt a desire to return to his brother, but before he could think of a plan his lover would shut the door and flood his mind with love for her.

One of these nights however a cloud of interstellar dust made its way to the door, hidden within was Pollux. In haste he reminded Castor of the tricks of Zeus and how this woman he loved had veins of ice, powers of pain, and the singular job of insuring that Castor may never return as the God he is. Pollux demanded that Castor open the door the following night and shine the light of a thousand stars upon the monster.

The following night Castor did as he was told. He held his lover in his arms until she drifted off to sleep. Carful to not disturb the monster that lay there, he got up and opened the door. The brightest of lights made its presence in the room. The room was dripping in gold and silks. Castor glanced upon the bed to see the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. Her skin was dusted by gold and she had the wings of an angel. Beside her was a thin golden arrow. When Castor touched the arrow he was overcome with love once more for his Cupid. He touched her lips with his so light to not wake his lover, but her golden brown eyes snapped open and they pinned him against the wall.

"The trust of love has been broken and your desires to see you brother have overcome the love for me. Zeus will certainly send you to an eternity as a servant of Pluto, but because my love for you was genuine and true I shall save you from Hell and send you back to your mortal land, stripped of all power you possess."

(Goddess of Love: by Dreaming and Sleeping)

Castor tried to reach for his lover but a cloud of interstellar dust wrapped him in darkness.

When Castor woke up he was back in his apartment. He glanced at his phone to see it was the morning of February 15th. He longed for both his brother and his Goddess of love. He could no longer believe it was a dream and he knew that in another year he must go find them both when the portal for love opens once again.



Bibliography:
Cupid and Psyche Part A by Apuleius. Website: Mythology and Folklore UN-Textbook

Wednesday, September 4, 2019

Reading Notes: Cupid and Psyche, Part B

Notes: Cupid and Psyche Part B

(Psyche and the Jar of Beauty by Waterhouse)

Characters:



[possible character or character story I would like to use in future are highlighted]




Psyche: Goddess of the soul. Married to Cupid. MORE INFO

Cupid: God of love. Married to Psyche. MORE INFO

Venus: Goddess of love. Married to Vulcan. Many Lovers including Mars (father of Cupids). MORE INFO

Vulcan: God of Fire. Brother of Mars. Married to Venus (loveless marriage). Every time Venus would have an affair her would become so angry that he would create the volcanoes on earth today.  MORE INFO

Proserpine: Goddess of grain. Queen of the Underworld. Married to Hades/Pluto. MORE INFO

Ceres: Goddess of agriculture. Daughter Proserpine, who was abducted by Pluto to the underworld. Proserpine must spend four months in the underworld, which breaks Ceres heart. Ceres emotions are why crops to not grow in winter.  MORE INFO

Pluto: God of the underworld. Married to Proserpine. MORE INFO

Mercury: God of Commerce. Aids in communication and conflict between Gods and mortals. MORE INFO

Jupiter: King of the Gods. Brother to Pluto and Ceres. Married to Juno MORE INFO

Juno: Queen of the Gods and Goddesses. Goddess of marriage and childbirth. MORE INFO

Pandora: First mortal woman. Created by Vulcan and Jupiter and released evil into humanity. MORE INFO

Apollo: Gos of healing and medicine. MORE INFO

Zephyr: God of the West wind. MORE INFO

Lucius: Protagonist of The Golden Ass.


(Roman Gods Family Tree: by Tales Beyond Belief)

Likes:

  • Story line and use of characters
  • The back story to every character and how it played into their personality and interactions
  • Organization of the story into separate events
Dislikes: 
  • I was not crazy about the introduction and conclusion of the story surrounding Cupid and Psyches. It was confusing to try to remember characters and events going on outside the story in the beginning once I got to the end. 
  • Author's notes in the beginning (unsure).


Overall:

This story was very enjoyable to read. For me this was because it was organized very well with each event occurring on a different page. The author's notes introduced characters and significant stories of Gods and Goddesses very well. I like how the author's notes introduce the characters, but I found myself skipping over them until the end. Personally I may put my author's notes at the bottom of the page as a summary of that page before moving on to the next. I also think it would be awesome to have a section of the introduction reserved as a table of characters, creatures, or events that are important to know about before reading. It would act as a reference guide throughout the story and clear up confusion before reading. 


Bibliography: 

Cupid and Psyche Part B by Apuleius. Website: Mythology and Folklore UN-Textbook

Tuesday, September 3, 2019

Reading Notes: Cupid and Psyche, Part A

Notes: Cupid and Psyche Part A


(Cupid and Psyche: picture by Stanhope)


Characters:

Psyche: Mortal in part A. Goddess of the soul. I think her innocence is used well in this story. She is not confident in herself which makes her doubt Cupid. She acts very young, but is put in mature situations: marriage, heartbreak, lies, possible death, and the pressure to please everyone. I think she would be a great character to use to show character development and growth. MORE INFO

Cupid: God of love. MORE INFO
Venus: Goddess of love. MORE INFO
Zephyr: God of the West wind. MORE INFO

Story Line: 

  • Story starts with a young woman who is captured by robbers for a ransom. While she is crying, an old woman comes into the reading and tells her a story about Cupid and Psyche.
  • Psyche is introduced as a beautiful mortal, even more beautiful that Venus. Venus is upset that Psyche is taking all the attention away from her and she tells her son Cupid to make her fall in love with someone hideous as revenge. 
  • The father of Psyche is told by the oracle of Apollo that he must take is daughter to a mountain crag to have a fatal marriage with a monster.
  • Psyche is taken to a rocky crag by her parents. Zephyr takes her to a meadow. Psyche is taken to Cupid's secret house. Cupid does not show himself to Psyche, but comes into the room at night and marries Psyche. Psyche does not know her husband is Cupid. LOVE IS BLIND
  • Psyche convinces Cupid to let her sisters visit her. When her sisters arrive they are filled with jealously and once they leave they plot against Psyche. 
  • Cupid warns Psyche of the danger she is in from her sisters. He also tells her she is pregnant. 
  • Sisters return and remind Psyche of what the oracle of Apollo told her father and instill doubt in Psyche's mind about her husband. They convince Psyche to turn on a lamp during the night and find out who her husband is and then kill him with a knife.
  • Psyche finds out who her husband is. Cupid is angry that she broke his trust and he leaves. 
  • Psyche returns. Both of her sisters jump from cliffs to their death after hearing Psyche's husband was Cupid. 
Beautiful Sentences:

“I’d rather die a hundred times than be robbed of your sweet caresses. Whoever you are, I love you deeply and adore you as much as life itself. Not even Cupid could compare to you." 

This sentence is filled with emotion and love, but it is also ironic. Psyche says that not even Cupid could compare to her husband; however, her husband is Cupid.

"Yet, as the light shone clear and the bed’s mysteries were revealed, she found her savage beast was the gentlest and sweetest creature of all, that handsome god Cupid, handsome now in sleep. At the sight, even the lamp’s flame quickened in joy, and the razor regretted its sacrilegious stroke."I like the personification used in this sentence and the detail it adds to the story.

Overall:


Overall I love this story so far. Some of the wording and language is difficult to understand, but other than that the reading is easy to follow along with. The theme that I get from the story is that love is blind. With that said there are other messages about trust, family, jealousy, and self doubt too. If I had to change the story I would change the details and interactions of the characters. I would keep the same characters and the same big events (Psyche being taken to Cupid, not knowing who her husband is, her sisters trying to hurt her and lie to her, and Psyche breaking Cupid's trust). 

Bibliography: 

Cupid and Psyche Part A by Apuleius. Website: Mythology and Folklore UN-Textbook