(My Exact Reaction: made with Cheeseburger)
Hey guys! I made my first TWINE!!!
If you have read a few of my more personal goal post you may know that I have wanted to do this for a while. I finally did it! It is easier than I thought, but also not super simple. If I had to suggest something it would be to test the story every few slides. I wrote my whole story and put the caption in the wrong place. I put it as a tag soooooo don't do that haha.
Overall, it was so much fun. I won't be using it again most likely, but it was pretty cool. I still don't know how to save the file, so I will include a link, but I don't know if it works. The Twine is based of off the story called The Stars in the Sky by Joseph Jacobs. Basically in the story a girl goes on a round robin adventure to find the stars. In the end it is just a dream, but you don't know till the last moment. I used this exact plot in the my twine, except I cut the adventure down a bit. I didn't want to get too carried away with my first twine in case I messed up! If you want to read the original here is the link!
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Hey Camille! Unfortunately, you have to export the file and upload it onto a site in order for it to save. Professor Gibbs has a really detailed set of instructions on how to do it (somewhere, lol). When I click your link, it just takes me to the regular Twine website, not to your story. I know that it's frustrating! I made my Storybook project all on Twine and it took me a minute to figure everything out, but at the end of the day it is such a cool software and I think I'll be using it a lot in the future!
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Hi Camille! I think it is great that you experimented with Twine. I have yet to do so, but I am really wanting to try it out! Like Cate said, the link provided directed me to the Twine website and not your particular story. I would really love to come back later and give it a read because the original story sounds intriguing!
ReplyDeleteHi Camille!
ReplyDeleteI am very excited that you decided to work with Twine this week for your story. It is an extremely powerful tool that allows you to share more effective stories. I have not yet had the opportunity to work with Twine, but I would really like to! As previous comments have mentioned, the link you provided is not quite working right. I would love to come back and check it out if I can!